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William Shakespeare

DAY TWENTY-FIVE~~SHADORMA~~A re-mix of day 24's poem~~25th November 2013

26/11/2013

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Take a poem you have written from earlier in the challenge, and re-mix it. Take a free verse poem and work it into a VILLANELLE or a SHADORMA. Rework numerous poems into a new one. Or take a line from one of the poems and write a response poem, or take it into an entirely different direction.



"YOU SEE, ONE LOVES THE SUNSET WHEN ONE IS SO SAD"  
Antoine de Saint-Exupery ~~From "The Little Prince"

SUNSET

Shadorma style


“You see one
loves the sunset when
one is so
sad”  Sunrise,
Happiness is rebalance
Rejuvenation.

Sun rises
A blaze of beauty,
Sunrise all
Round the world,
Children are born and breathe life.
The sunrise brings light.

Sun circles

the globe with real warmth,
People live
People love,
Soaked in rays of survival.
Intellectual growth.

Life begins.
The sun starts the day
Lighting clouds
Bringing joy.
Birth, joy, life, sadness, tears, death,
The cycle of life.

Sunrise, then
the sunset brings night.
One loves the
sunrise at
the dawn, when we feel happy.
After a deep sleep.


Depression.
Balance of the mind
is upset.
Day seems black.
Night brings sweet sleep and stilled thought.
Blank reality.

“You see one
loves the sunset when
one is so
sad” Sunrise,
Happiness is rebalance
Rejuvenation,



By John Yeo~ 25th November 2013




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